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Just Don't:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 04:49:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't mind
you taking things from me.
I don't mind
you violating my rights
I don't mind
you even lying to me
I even don't mind
you don't want to fight.
I do mind
you don't love me out right.
I don't mind
you laughing at me,
I don't mind
you playing all these
games with me
I do mind
all these excuses
My life just don't
revolve around you.
ok
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2015-11-07 16:49:23]
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Re: Just Don't:
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 05:10:26 PM AEST
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| they certainly are not |
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Re: Just Don't:
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by speedy on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 08:38:43 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: Just Don't:
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by softerware on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 10:46:49 PM AEST
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Well said Richard!
I have to feel sorry for people who have such a sense of entitlement. It comes sorrowful to know that we are not the center of the universe. A lesson we should have learned in kindergarten by having to share with others, is a terrible blow when you are 30 something!
If no one needs you; what is your worth?
To many, it is too difficult to answer. They will seek people who are unable to be alone, to be necessary to someone. It is a lock and key relationship.
Your poem has told the story so clearly. softerware |
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Re: Just Don't:
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by thomasu01 on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 05:19:04 AM AEST
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| I like this how true in some relation ships too. |
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