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my own shade
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 11:43:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The is more darkness
inside lost in invisible
ink
deeper than swallowing
nights existence her unpredictable
foundation
rests under covers behind shadows
next to the way down on top of left
behind
with the soft solace of my own shade
the abandon of yellow and orange.
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ming
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2015-11-07 11:43:57]
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Re: my own shade
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 12:14:42 PM AEST
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"next to the way down on top of left
behind"
Super cool line here.
More brilliance to light the darkness life hurls.
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Re: my own shade
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by softerware on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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"With the soft solace of my own shade the abandon of yellow and orange"
Color and sound have healing powers. Yours surely do!
I picture you at the window with the nighttime sky lighting your canvas as you create swirls of yellow and orange; the colors of a soul that has overcome and knows of their own joy.
You have set me to thinking -- what color am I?
A lovely chant you have written to dispel the darkness and start the day!
softerware
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Re: my own shade
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 05:06:46 PM AEST
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Never did like yellow and orange.
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Re: my own shade
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by speedy on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 08:35:03 PM AEST
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Great write.
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