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You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:49:47 PM in AEST
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All that it was
Was a post on a screen
An innocent invite
So why do I bleed?
Songs of sorrow
Over a gift
A gesture of kindness
Well, you can keep it.
Keep those stupid compliments
Just let me do my work
I truly want no part of it
I can not see the worth
And frankly -
Judge me if you will,
I dont care if all this hurts
Sometimes, see
I get like this
In vicious
Dark outbursts
You've always had a butterfly soul
Its getting on my nerves
This epidemic
Of vile affection
No purpose does it serve
Turn off the music
Close the door
And draw the window curtain
To all I know
To all I am
Your perfect prescence
Is a miserable burden
I'm troubled
Copyright ©
codeofcohen
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2015-11-03 19:49:47]
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 08:09:54 PM AEST
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In understand. I'm troubled too. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by speedy on
Thursday, 5th November 2015 @ 05:18:15 PM AEST
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Wow. Great write.
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by FireStarter on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 03:09:38 PM AEST
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| Woah amazing |
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 05:54:58 PM AEST
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This is a nice write, but I don;t relate so much. I'm usually the happy-go-lucky one in the relationship, as that's when I'm at my highest of emotional states.
If this is a poem written from your true state of mind or feeling deep down, I can say one thing though. Often at times when we feel like this about people that are close to us, it's because we are dishonest with ourselves, in the respects that we envy another. Rather than try to learn what makes someone tick, and embrace their qualities into our own fabric of identity, we sometimes choose to be conservative, and deny the hope for evolution of our soul and mind, though we may not ever admit it to our self, or our significant other.
Thanks for sharing. :) |
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 05:54:18 PM AEST
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| Too many 'i's and not enough 'yous'. get it? Love the poem. |
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by thomasu01 on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 05:03:24 AM AEST
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| Great work and I can relate with this, it is often seen in relationships. |
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Re: You're innocent and beautiful, why do I want to hurt you?
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 03:55:36 AM AEST
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A flow all lost souls can relate too
well done.... |
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