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Come on in
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 06:10:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come on my man let me close the door. Take whatever seat you want, be it table, chair or booth
Let me give you both what you deserve and I want, that being the cold hard truth
You are what you are-smart, you're athletic, and you're eye candy to all the girls
You can have whatever you want, go get whatever you want in this world
Me, obviously, I'm none of those things, I wish I could change them, poof I'm Prince Charming in an instant
But alas I cannot, I'm fine with that. So stop trying to kill me just because I'm different
My face is not a punching bag for your fist, it's not that at all, you've done it at the bus stop, in the backyard, and most recently at the bar
Dude, I'm done forgiving you, this ***** way too hard
Why do you take such perverse pleasure in watching me fall?
Oh, now you'll just be more discrete about it, and berate me on some social media wall
I don't understand why you can't be happy for anyone, wishing their's was your reality
And whenever you feel low, it's me you attack, making up fabricated stories of my sexuality
You've used your nine lives, stop trying to put me into a hole
I'm not your problem, I've tried to be your friend. Get help, somewhere else quit being a bitter *****.
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2015-11-03 18:10:46]
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Re: Come on in
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:22:19 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings- about one totally unworthy of
your friendship, caring or help! imo you should stay home and
write and avoid this one and others who associate with him- or
change where you hang out for a while 'til he finds someone else
to berate- or a good punch to the nose, either way stay away as
much as possible because he's a negative force in your life
and no one needs that,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Come on in
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:56:55 PM AEST
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I'm very proud of you for writing this. I know you and I don't know you, but I do know I'm proud of you.
Invierno |
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Re: Come on in
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 11:41:03 PM AEST
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I am now sixty two and since I was a child up until present day have been dealing with people like that. I say I hope the best for you but my reality is that these kinds of people will always be there. Why? I haven't a freaking clue. I just discovered someone again spreading falsehoods about me. I suppose maybe these types of people are there to show us that we can be better. They say things happen for a reason...maybe that's why this kinda ***** happens. At least the good people know they're being good because of ***** like this. Perhaps we need the comparison so we can say to ourselves, "I'm glad I'm living the good life and glad I'm not a *****head like that!
I know that doesn't make it better for you. I am just sorry you have to go through it.
Pieces of us are shared through our poetry and from the pieces I see, I believe you're a good person and don't deserve this kinda *****. I pray it stops.
I like the way you expressed yourself in this heartfelt write and I hope it helped you some.
Take care and keepa writin',
Tim |
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Re: Come on in
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 4th November 2015 @ 02:26:14 PM AEST
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Sometimes you just have to let it go.
Don't ever play second fiddle to anyone.
I know the story all too well and that is why I believe
in karma. It may not come as soon as you like. But it will eventually come.
James |
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Re: Come on in
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 4th November 2015 @ 02:36:50 PM AEST
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Aye caramba! Expresses exactly how I've felt over the years growing up. Keep embracing your difference and defying the haters; you're gonna do well. Great writing and emotion here. Take care and God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: Come on in
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 10:55:31 AM AEST
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Fox,
You expressed your feelings brilliantly in this! Bullys suck. Keep writing,
God bless,
Irisblue |
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