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The Four Seasons
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 03:23:26 PM in AEST
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The four seasons
I love them all
Even the burr of winter
The chill in the fall
Summer sun full of fun
The cool soft breeze of spring
After the thaw
Spring brings the joy of new love
With summer comes the steam
If you know what I mean
Sometimes fall can end it all
If your new love survives the cold
Your heart is warmed
And be warned
It's time to start it all over
Again
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:11:22 PM AEST
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| lovely, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 07:58:02 PM AEST
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I always dig nature poems, man, and this is no exception.
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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This is catchy, real, and useable in a lot of ways. Great stuff. I love the change too.
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 11:28:00 PM AEST
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Thoroughly enjoyable. I love the way it seems to come back to spring...back to spring once again to have a summer of love.
Niiiice.
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 4th November 2015 @ 02:38:49 PM AEST
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Love the comparisons here! Love is certainly applicable to the changes in weather, and you know you've got a strong one when it holds up under inclimate circumstances. Take care and God bless,
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by irisblue on
Thursday, 5th November 2015 @ 09:31:49 AM AEST
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| This poem made me smile! Beautiful James! |
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Re: The Four Seasons
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by softerware on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 03:03:15 PM AEST
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You made me miss my home (NY)..I live in the desert--one season all year round! Have you ever seen Christmas ornaments on a palm tree? A Santa in speedos?
Oh for the assault of riotous colors floating from the trees! A capsule of snow muffling the city noise!
A mile of green forest!
James, I suspect your seasons are passages of the heart, for there is a romantic within your story!
I love the way your ending rewinds the tale..."It's time to start all over again!"
Heartfelt, bountiful, and sustaining, so like the author!
softerware
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