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Freedom
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senates
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Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 09:55:32 AM in AEST
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Your blood makes the contract bend,
You need to pay the debt,
Woman and wine,
Was it worth it spent?
Children won//'//t feed themselves,
Relief alone is pure ecstasy,
Just give in...
You try to break it off,
You don//'//t want it in,
What was once yours,
Tainted and obtained,
Devoured solely by one,
You never could realize,
What you were after,
Even when it was gone...
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Re: Freedom
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 08:03:16 PM AEST
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A painful, but well written, read. I'm not certain of the exactitude of the situation, but know I have been in like-wise torment.
Great expression.
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Re: Freedom
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by speedy on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 09:45:45 PM AEST
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Good write.
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Re: Freedom
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by kmec1990 on
Wednesday, 18th November 2015 @ 11:55:21 AM AEST
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what seems to restrain usually maintains
Old adage holds true
Bird in hand worth 2 in the bush
Well written enjoyed the read
Thanks for sharing
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