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What Going ON:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 11:06:35 PM in AEST
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You see me BUT
yet you don't know me.
You wake me up BUT
you won't comfort me.
You love me BUT
yet you don't trust me.
You hug me BUT
yet you don't want me.
What am I to do BUT
to keep loving you.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2015-11-01 23:06:35]
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Re: What Going ON:
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 12:06:14 AM AEST
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this beautifully penned poem perfectly describes what i'm going
through with someone near and dear to me, i guess some people
just don't get it- hopefully one day they will:)
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Re: What Going ON:
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 01:27:47 AM AEST
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I think we all go through this at times no matter your age. Very emotional write!
Well done!
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 02:58:35 PM AEST
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Oh man I felt this one. Such a strong pull on the heart. Short and sweet, certainly to the point. Take care and God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: What Going ON:
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by softerware on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 08:13:24 PM AEST
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This speaks to so many of us at one time or another. The irony is, we stay until we are evicted! Trying to make something out of nothing..believing we have no options.
Time is a healer.
This is to the point, Richard. Deadly accurate, and stirring memories, that let me be grateful that I'm not there anymore. Thank you for such a well written invitation to remember!
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