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The scent of my Rib......
Contributed by
chard
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Smelling the warm air from your nose, as I kiss your lips. Reminds me of the word sensuous.
You express your love to me in several different ways.
You walk the streets of this world representing my name.
Your touch melts all my stress away.
Your ways, are an intricate maze, that I navigate with grace.
Your style carries for miles, and U have a smooth sense of taste.
Your love is great. I'll eat your sex off of a crystal plate.
Your man will never hesitate, to touch your face, in a crowded place. Knowbody else exists when your within my space.
My warped world elevates into a realm that lies straight and far from narrow..
Your love glides through my mind like a sparrow.
I walk within your shadow. Cuz your the biggest thing in my life.
Your a Cajun spice in an open wound, demanding attention as soon as you enter the room.
I love you.
I need you, to be you!!
If you ever changed, it would rearrange my brain. I would become insane. Searching for what used to be the relief for my pain.
Walking through the park. Glancing at lovers, whispering to one another.
Amp's my heart.
Cuz I know in the dark, of the park, lurks a scent that was once within. Now covered with it's own skin.
And it's not brand new..Your scent has me floating like PePe Le Pee-u.
I'd allow a bullet to sink deep into my head, that was propelled at you.
Patrice, my love is true.
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chard
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2003-05-29 11:05:00]
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Re: The scent of my Rib......
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:59:30 AM AEST
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beautiful
Shari |
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Re: The scent of my Rib......
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by banjo on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:54:37 PM AEST
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A lot of really good writing here. It's chock full of good images -- and a few I wonder about (Pepe le Pew?)
I really like the title.
You don't need about half the commas, though. |
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Re: The scent of my Rib......
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by Chard on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:54:52 AM AEST
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thanks for the love, and the incite.
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Re: The scent of my Rib......
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by Chard on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:55:17 AM AEST
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| Thank you Ms.Shari. |
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