|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lofty Skies
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 04:14:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
|
While beneath them, billows categorizing into groups.
Two souls aboard a 747, they quarrel.
As above, so bellow, hazes justified as poofs.
As aboard, two depths, dispensing of morals.
Mitigations, half-harms, achieving not a compromise.
Faulty accusations, un-disarmed cravings behind sweltering eyes.
Piercing rays of an endangered sun, how exquisite its waves as we only have one.
Yet, she examines the visor as she slowly pulls it down,
what a shame to deny its warmth, our taken for granted sun.
Must I trigger sentiment?, actuating the vigor in stride,
while she leans back ,unaware of the timid beast inside.
Now I to quell her reticence no longer, I of vital cravenness.
She to fall victim to the stronger, the stronger of indifference.
Copyright ©
flex4life13
... [
2015-10-27 16:14:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lofty Skies
(User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Boy, you packed this poem up.
What a wordy well chosen write.
Very dense with good flow and very unique indeed.
James |
|
|
Re: Lofty Skies
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 03:26:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
