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The Stream Running Through My Head
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 25th October 2015 @ 09:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I envision a stream running through my head
It echoes the words of
Both the living and dead
With the soul calming water
So flows the time
Unlike a horizontal hourglass
It keeps perfect rhythm and rhyme
With it time rushes by
Like an old-time hymn
A soothing lullaby
As my life floats on by
I'm given the wisdom from within
To ready myself
As the stream in my mind has now run dry
The time has come to say
Farewell and goodbye
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-10-25 21:56:26]
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Re: The Stream Running Through My Head
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by Invierno on
Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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I trust this to be a metaphor, my friend.
Invierno |
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Re: The Stream Running Through My Head
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 03:17:55 AM AEST
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Holy hell that's great! Sad and I hope this is simply deep thoughts.
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Re: The Stream Running Through My Head
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 09:46:08 PM AEST
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| You can really put some words together. |
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Re: The Stream Running Through My Head
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 11:24:56 PM AEST
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might that stream be your stream of conscience waiting for the
next refreshing rain? i look forward to your next write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Stream Running Through My Head
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by kmec1990 on
Thursday, 12th November 2015 @ 11:41:14 PM AEST
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beautifully penned
K |
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