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Abracadabra
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Sunday, 25th October 2015 @ 08:14:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You left without a single trace
forgot your shoes in your sudden haste
No note, text, not even a call
You always said you'd be my downfall
You've done this several times before
and again my heart, you've torn
You always swear that you wont look back
but this has been your greatest magic act
You disappear, quicken the pace
each time you apologize to my face,
but do you really mean the things you say
can't you stop lying for today?
Next time you leave just stay gone
so, I won't wonder what I did wrong
To deserve your greatest act
abracadabra, don't look back
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-10-25 20:14:58]
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Re: Abracadabra
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by legato29 on
Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 10:27:28 AM AEST
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| Very nice! I love the last verse especially. The rhyme scheme enhances the poem...almost like you're casting a spell for her to disappear! :D |
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Re: Abracadabra
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 03:32:48 AM AEST
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beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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