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So This Is The Rope's End
Contributed by
invierno
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Saturday, 24th October 2015 @ 08:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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So this is the rope's end.
No voice no sound even needed
by me, nor heeded even bothered
of energy to voice.
This rope's end
when even choice is
not considered any more than
a flea bite
or wrinkled sheets that crimp sleep
sought to flee thoughts that scream.
A rope is a lonely place to be.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2015-10-24 20:57:17]
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Re: So This Is The Rope's End
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by softerware on
Sunday, 25th October 2015 @ 03:11:38 AM AEST
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Mournful. Missing the mate that gave the lifestyle permission, perhaps.
So well written that it aches.
"Wrinkled sheets that crimp sleep"..
Ropes end tells us:
We cannot do what we are not ready to do.
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Re: So This Is The Rope's End
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 25th October 2015 @ 10:02:36 AM AEST
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Very deep and profound write
The end of the rope is not a good place to be.
Not much else to say .............
Peace to you both!
James |
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Re: So This Is The Rope's End
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th October 2015 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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| I like the final few lines. Stay strong |
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Re: So This Is The Rope's End
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by irisblue on
Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 04:46:50 PM AEST
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Invierno,
God bless you and your wife! Courage and prayers to you both. Never Ever give up! And keep the brilliant poetry coming. |
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