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Crazy
Contributed by
blknwht
on
Wednesday, 21st October 2015 @ 01:19:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I must be crazy
To have held on this long
The impact you made of my life
I can still feel you so strong
But I must be nuts
Thinking you'll come back
Wondering if you're only focusing
On everything that I lack
I'm doing so much better
I'm in such a great place
I could be a great friend
Even a familiar face
I'd never do you wrong
Like the one day that I did
I will always write you songs
It will be just splendid
Don't know where your at
Don't know how you are
Don't know where you'll be
To me, your not that far
Copyright ©
blknwht
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2015-10-21 13:19:07]
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Re: Crazy
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 21st October 2015 @ 07:55:50 PM AEST
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Both sad and wonderful! Such a great clash between nostalgia and adoration, such honesty too. Absolutely loved reading, and am glad you posted. Take care and God bless,
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Re: Crazy
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 22nd October 2015 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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I'll agree with deidra. :)
The nostalgia meeting adoration is great, quite grand I should say. A bit worry-some given the obsession, but that's exactly what love gives us.
Thanks. :)
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