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bad dream
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Tuesday, 20th October 2015 @ 12:03:42 AM in AEST
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Broken fingers, and
Broken toes
A broken heart, that
can't heal woes
Broken words, with a
Broken voice
Words you can't speak,
From an unnamed choice
Broken soul, that
can't withstand pain
The lovely lies you've told,
left an ugly stain
Broken, jagged stain
covers your skin
Purple bruises show the pain,
thats trapped within
Now, they're fading
from purple to green
I hope I wake up
from this hellish dream
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FireStarter
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2015-10-20 00:03:42]
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Re: bad dream
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 20th October 2015 @ 08:54:18 AM AEST
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I know the feeling.
Great write!
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Re: bad dream
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 12:18:25 PM AEST
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Is the waking life 'the dream'?
Sound so real it might have happened. It has for me, and as I learn of you, suspect the same has happened.
The repeated use of 'broken' is fine employment; it sets the tone for this very well written recitation of how *****ty life can be at times.
4 stars!
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