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Crystals Dreams.....
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Monday, 19th October 2015 @ 12:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She thinking
what could go wrong next
living in this world is so complex,
because everyday
seems to bring a new pain
and some alone time.
is what she needs.
In a field of moans alone
she's dreaming to be
creating
things from her mind
sweetly just drifting....
an emotional ocean is out there
and she needs to swim.
Crystal kisses Jayden tenderly
and takes on
another new day of pain,
she does her best
as she silently screams...
and dreams of being free.
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unknown_utopia
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2015-10-19 12:54:13]
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Re: Crystals Dreams.....
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by irisblue on
Tuesday, 20th October 2015 @ 09:48:51 PM AEST
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wow!
just beautiful and eloquently expressed. love this.
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Re: Crystals Dreams.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd October 2015 @ 10:51:41 PM AEST
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Wonderfully expressed. I can relate to what she is going through in some ways. Definitely wanting to get away from it all and having some alone time is something I can relate to. I know I cherish my solitude at times.
Great poem and thank you for sharing it with us.
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Re: Crystals Dreams.....
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 04:49:29 AM AEST
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beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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