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in love
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 02:41:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Adoration
Sweaty palms,
increased beating ot the heart
Slowly trusting,
we don't feel so torn apart
Love
cupids arrow, flying high
Red hearts dancing
in the sky
Melding,
hand in hand
We're intertwined,
where did the time pass by?
Falling
forever falling
Into your eyes,
Frozen where the darkness lies
Fire burns
in the dark of night
Burning in my heart
with you in sight
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-10-14 02:41:53]
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Re: in love
(User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 11:39:08 AM AEST
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The poet is truly in love
He describes it with joy
Due to his heart's mirth
He has a poem so worth
Every loving soul will enjoy
Let all get bliss via this now.
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: in love
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 15th October 2015 @ 04:52:04 AM AEST
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"Red hearts dancing
in the sky"
Those lines make me picture looking up directly into the sky, and seeing twirling hearts, whether they be two at a constant binding, or many in representation of all loves. It really creates an entire scene all in its own. I love this idea most of all, this picture. With that on top of the great feeling of submerging one's toes and body into the placid pond of love, this is a great way to end the night.
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Re: in love
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Friday, 16th October 2015 @ 04:45:25 AM AEST
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| love is a wonderfull thing and you express it beautifully here.very unique.i like this write. |
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Re: in love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 12:09:12 PM AEST
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sweet:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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