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Cold Piece of Work
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Tuesday, 13th October 2015 @ 11:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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I've been agonizing
over just what kind
of 'friendship we
really have
Recalling the things
I've accepted,
things I've
allowed myself
to go through
just to spend
time with
you
things I knew
were all the way
wrong,things
that put me in
places that I
never will belong
Having to hide like
rabbits in the walls.
Always unanswered
questions being
set up to take the
fall
Building and
building on tall
strong walls
while your right
behind me driving
A wrecking ball.
Smashing and
destroying my
Pride and Positivity
as if they were fine
porcelain dolls
Antagonizing
torment,
Ripping apart my
humanity
making me feel
incompetent,
irrelevant,
and filled with
Hostility...
orig (906) Poetry
10/2015
By: D.L.Brown
aka $tr8 $av
Wikkid Rich
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
... [
2015-10-13 23:18:34]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cold Piece of Work
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 12:08:09 AM AEST
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Splendid poem. We're living the same nightmare.
I loved the flow and angst in your poem. An angry fed up flow that was very exciting to read.
Great write!
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Re: Cold Piece of Work
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by ming on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 09:30:28 AM AEST
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Awesome. Strong. Bold.
ming |
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Re: Cold Piece of Work
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th October 2015 @ 06:08:33 AM AEST
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A dagger in both form and effect.
Superb write!
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