|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Hello
Contributed by
sideshowrunaway
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Hello...
The distance in a breath
If it's not felt on my cheek
It's too much
It's too far
The sound of my own voice, hollow
Echoes
Am I that out of my depth?
Is that really me?
Do I sound that insecure?
Do you miss me
Do you wish I was there
Is that laughter on the line?
Are you sure you're there alone?
Don't answer the unanswerable
If the truth would hurt
In the space of a 5-hour time difference
My imagination has run a marathon
Of thought
Leaving lonliness to abuse me
And jealousy to pick up the peices
Do you miss me?
The way I miss you?
Hello...?
Copyright ©
sideshowrunaway
... [
2003-05-29 05:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:59:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very interesting...venkat |
|
|
Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 )
by limpingunicorn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:02:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice one. You have caught the uncertainty, vulnerability and doubt that we are all prey to when called on to trust. |
|
|
Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:49:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yeah I hate that long distance crap. Grr. Brings out our deepest insecurities... and it's just really lonely and really sucks. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:49:48 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very good write...caught all the insecurities of a long distance relationship
Shari |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
