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First Time
Contributed by
sideshowrunaway
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The first time we made love
In your mother's unmade bed,
I felt nothing but feeling
I noticed nothing but you
The last time we made time
To make love in our own bed
I felt nothing
But I noticed the ceiling needed painting
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2003-05-29 05:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: First Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:51:25 AM AEST (User
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Ahhh the end of the honeymoon phase...
Shari |
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