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Jackal
Contributed by
Northernlights
on
Thursday, 1st October 2015 @ 09:44:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where is the softness of life,
When I am consumed by the lion's roar.
Jackals baying for my blood in a cotton wool world lined with glass,
To rip and gauge, I bathe my wounds in sleep, in sanctuary
knowing,
The next door is right behind the war!
There are lives behind the devil and she is driven!
Who am I against her toxic breath!
Who am I against her Barbie smile.
I lift my nose to the air and breathe in her
Weakness,
For she,
the darker side
Of me!
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Northernlights
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2015-10-01 09:44:18]
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Re: Jackal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st October 2015 @ 02:01:42 PM AEST
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Ah, inner demons. Beat them down but they're still there.
As always, your poem has the wow factor built right in!
Thank you for sharing you, Anna.
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Re: Jackal
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by ming on
Friday, 2nd October 2015 @ 04:09:47 PM AEST
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Ahh, let the demons out... Very cool write.
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Re: Jackal
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by Invierno on
Friday, 2nd October 2015 @ 10:55:15 PM AEST
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Oh, Dude...this is smokin!
Sexy and dangerous and....smokin!
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Re: Jackal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd October 2015 @ 02:03:04 PM AEST
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This really got to me. To face the he/she within us all is the only way to get back to 'us'. and you are the better for recognising her weakness. Salute.
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Re: Jackal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd October 2015 @ 02:03:09 PM AEST
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This really got to me. To face the he/she within us all is the only way to get back to 'us'. and you are the better for recognising her weakness. Salute.
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