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Test Subject
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Wednesday, 30th September 2015 @ 07:44:56 AM in AEST
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Test subject
Some days I feel like saying WTF am I in a grand experiment?
Do I have to perform for rewards?
Is this a very long joke, on me?
Who is pulling the strings of my life?
I'll tell you one thing it isn't me
The failings of others is ruining my good day
Stop sending the idiots in to bring misery to me
Simple tasks are turning into impossibilities
Am I your test subject?
Please choose another, I'm not free and didn't sign up for this service
The sun is shining
The flowers in bloom
But this means nothing
When around every corner there is doom
By banjosandwitch 28/09/15
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Re: Test Subject
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 1st October 2015 @ 09:45:58 AM AEST
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| Well penned and I know this struggle all too well. |
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Re: Test Subject
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by Invierno on
Friday, 2nd October 2015 @ 10:44:56 PM AEST
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I feel ya' brother. Keep expressing yourself. I always enjoy it when you do, friend.
Mike |
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Re: Test Subject
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd October 2015 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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| I like the interrogative opening of your poem, but I'm asking myself: 'Is this a tad self-pitying, should there be more balls here?' The one who should be pulling the strings on your life, is you. |
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Re: Test Subject
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by softerware on
Saturday, 3rd October 2015 @ 04:09:49 PM AEST
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You have touched a truth many share--frustration.
Expressions like "Are you kidding?" come to mind.
If life were truly a test as you propose, I would fail.
I hope no one is keeping score. I have moved the ball and set the clock back just to get through another day.
Doom cannot survive in sunlight (gloom and doom)
however, so always bring a flashlight.
softerware |
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