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full of broken things
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 10:56:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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annihilated and
created every
minute
probabilities
I want the
fabric of my
uinVERSE
to be a
blanket fort.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2015-09-28 22:56:03]
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Re: full of broken things
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 06:43:35 AM AEST
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Picturing the fabric of spacetime as a blanket fort was pretty surprising and throwing myself for a loop, no doubt about that.
I'm a bit thrown off though with the capitalization of verse though. I feel it has to have some sort of relevance, or importance, though I can't discern it. Outside of that, I enjoy this, but I feel the weight isn't fully set on me in regards to enjoyment(if that makes sense). |
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Re: full of broken things
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 11:28:16 AM AEST
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evocative and pleasing to the mind and eye
Invierno |
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Re: full of broken things
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 05:58:23 PM AEST
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| Too cool! :) |
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