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Metaphorical Meteor - The Day She Left
Contributed by
waynster
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Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 09:53:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A meteor hitting earth
a blood red moon in the sky
I never even thought
it would be the day my mother would die
Metaphorically speaking
a meteor did hit my world today
A blood red moon to remember
when my mother went away
My heart weighs heavy
as severe sadness churns through me
I feel a severely deep loss
this day I never wanted to see
Torn apart
a deep crater within
Lost in emotion
as this new day does begin
Letting her go
is something I have to do
She is now gone
I just have to believe it’s true
27 September 2015
the whole world changed on this day
My dear mother ascended to the heavens
from her pain, the good lord took her away
Many tears have been shed for you
your loss to us is sad, but you have no more pain
I love you and miss you so much
your loving son Wayne
Dedicated to Bernice G Searles
28 September 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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waynster
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2015-09-28 09:53:40]
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Re: Metaphorical Meteor - The Day She Left
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by PhantoMist on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 05:25:15 PM AEST
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Hey man, just keep your head up. She is probably in heaven along with my uncle and great grandmother. Hopefully you will see her again one day to tell her that you love her and you are so happy to see her again. So just keep your head up bro. Just keep doing you. And amazing poem. It really hit me.
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Re: Metaphorical Meteor - The Day She Left
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by irisblue on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 10:50:16 PM AEST
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Wayne,
I am so sorry for your loss. Prayers for you and your family. This is a beautiful poem and tribute. |
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Re: Metaphorical Meteor - The Day She Left
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 06:18:42 PM AEST
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Oh, man, Waynster! Such a beautiful tribute. So sorry for your loss.
Tim |
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Re: Metaphorical Meteor - The Day She Left
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 12:45:23 PM AEST
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so sorry for your loss, a beautiful tribute,
hugs n' love nessa
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