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we all grow
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Sunday, 27th September 2015 @ 10:42:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Little fingers
tiny toes
Big brown eyes
Pale, pink nose
Loud giggles
toothless grins
Crawlin' around
this is where life begins
Sitting up,
learning to walk
Next thing you know
they'll learn to talk
"Mama, daddy,
no and yes",
Soon, they'll be hunting
treasure on their quest
Tying their shoes,
and riding a bike
Taking turns,
as they're still a little tyke
But, sooner or later
they're gonna grow tall
They're gonna go places,
and learn to fall
We'll still be there
to patch them up,
But we all have to tell them,
"Hold your head up."
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FireStarter
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2015-09-27 22:42:41]
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Re: we all grow
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 06:19:53 AM AEST
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I like this. Kind, loving, and puts a smile on the face. :)
Nicely done. :) |
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Re: we all grow
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by rumrunner on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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There is a good concept here.
Expand it, make it more epic and poignant,
kind of a Joni Mitchell thing.
Let it "Grow". |
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Re: we all grow
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 12:59:28 PM AEST
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sweet write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: we all grow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 09:36:33 AM AEST
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