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Kiss me Goodnight
Contributed by
softerware
on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 12:06:13 AM in AEST
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The day left me battered, exhausted and old;
Tired, discouraged, wordless and cold.
My patience used up, my spirit depleted;
Standing, just barely, a warrior defeated.
Your warm wrinkled hand reaches for mine;
At the end of each day, time after time.
The world has no meaning when I’m in your arms.
It pales and withdraws, and I’m safe from all harm.
The sound of your breath is love’s lullaby;
Cradling this child while the night passes by.
Tomorrow I’ll waken to fight a new fight;
Knowing you’ll be there to kiss me goodnight.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2015-09-25 00:06:13]
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Re: Kiss me Goodnight
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by Invierno on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 09:12:01 AM AEST
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Very nice. So many of your poems bring me back to a soft and comfortable place, as this one certainly does.
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Re: Kiss me Goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 05:00:26 PM AEST
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Love the delivery and the poetic style. Fathers are the safety of daughters. x
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Re: Kiss me Goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 05:16:43 PM AEST
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If it was fathers,
I'm done long ago. If it
was mothers? I'm suffering more
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Re: Kiss me Goodnight
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by Spike on
Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 07:26:46 PM AEST
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Exactly. We can't maintain, alone.
Nicely worded.
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Re: Kiss me Goodnight
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by speedy on
Saturday, 26th September 2015 @ 01:49:23 PM AEST
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Reading this was like recalling a memory - a feeling of comfort & innocence.
Great write.
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