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The Oak Tree
Contributed by
solly
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Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 09:32:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Where a window slopes
Steeply down my solitary eye
And leaves reline my brows
An oak tree holds a green devotion.
I am that tree trembling as I think,
A fresh spring sprays my branches
My leafy eyes inspire the day
Then fold expiring at night.
Through branches swinging in the wind
The lights like candles are my eyes
My bridal couch lies in the hole
My green bride steps slowly to me
Howl no more you envious hounds.
The green tree is my bride and me
We briefly merge and soon are shed
Truncated felled in memory.
Solly Jacobson 1953
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solly
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2015-09-21 09:32:52]
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Re: The Oak Tree
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by bod on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 10:33:11 AM AEST
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This poem is absolutely sublime, beautiful, inspiring poem !
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Re: The Oak Tree
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 11:33:57 AM AEST
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Definitely poetry in action!!! Beautifully done!
Thank you and  to YPDC.
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Re: The Oak Tree
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by ming on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 03:42:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Dreamy. Lovely.
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Re: The Oak Tree
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by speedy on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 04:38:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!
Great write.
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Re: The Oak Tree
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by DreamPoetess on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2015 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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| My My! Lovely poem, connecting as one in the universe, very, very spiritual indeed! Thank you for this creation, Solly |
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