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Steady Friend
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 06:12:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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My friend has come again I see.
Blushing as a virgin a minute apart
every twenty-four hours.
Lifting her skirts to reveal promises
only I can make real.
Dawn, I love you anew as fresh
as yestermorn's dew.
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Invierno
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2015-09-20 06:12:04]
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Re: Steady Friend
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 06:44:44 AM AEST
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Ah, wonderful. You do her justice with your words. She came silently this morning, through a haunting mist. How many times I've greeted her, and yes, she's a friend alright.
Perfect, my friend, just perfect. |
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Re: Steady Friend
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by softerware on
Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 09:04:57 AM AEST
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How clever to see the dawn as a friend "Lifting her skirts to reveal promises only I can make real."
I wonder if dusk is the black, blue, and bloodied carcass of winning her daily battle, withdrawing to heal for another sunrise?
There is a lesson of endless renewal and hope in here somewhere!
softerware
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Re: Steady Friend
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 09:55:15 AM AEST
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Full of promise, and uplifting. Beautiful.
~Scorp |
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Re: Steady Friend
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 05:46:51 AM AEST
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I enjoy this, as well as the comments.
The third line is my favorite though. It makes this not only happy, but an inspirational piece. While it's best not to base our self-worth or esteem upon the environment, there's nothing wrong with allowing it to remind ourselves of what's precious to us, and what we really seek.
Nicely done. |
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Re: Steady Friend
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by speedy on
Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 04:34:58 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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