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Broken
Contributed by
Northernlights
on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 03:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Butterfly why?
Do you fold and hide,
Such colours of vibrant life!
For death has not life
Extinguished thus.
But light has faded still
And dewy tears soft with
Nature fall as wings have
Broken flight,and harsh the
Cry of empty life
As you welcome the
Darkest night
For
Though your beauty is still
Untouched,and lifts to
Guilded Skies, a beating heart
Of happiness this deathly dance
Denies.
Copyright ©
Northernlights
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2015-09-16 15:36:49]
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Re: Broken
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 05:33:06 PM AEST
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| Very cool, this reminds me of the poems and plays I studied and read back in high school. This is what inspires me to write. Thanks for a great poem |
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Re: Broken
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by ming on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
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A true bard-like read. Cool!
ming |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2015 @ 10:00:33 AM AEST
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| I read the other day that butterflies can't see their own wings. Can you imagine having beauty without vanity or the arrogance |
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Re: Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 02:21:08 PM AEST
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The way you express yourself through poetry always impresses the hell out of me. There is an abundance of truly remarkable writers on this site, and so many unique styles of writing to admire. The beauty and wonder of the universe is always at the forefront of your work.
Thank you for continuing to share your beautiful artwork.
~Scorp |
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Re: Broken
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by irisblue on
Thursday, 5th May 2016 @ 09:23:40 PM AEST
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| I don/'/t know if I understand this the way you meant it, but it brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully tragic. Amazing. |
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Re: Broken
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 28th July 2020 @ 03:30:07 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful..... |
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