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Dwarf
Contributed by
Dimitriand
on
Monday, 14th September 2015 @ 07:22:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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First line, seconde line,
Figure, face in night,
Stylo like arrow in flight,
My rainbow natural is the sign
In blue navy and brown earth's eyes,
I put you in my hearty rimes,
But you are not alive,
All heal through i cast Ariadne's tread of truth right
For Eve like the dress sweet white,
But your mouth rest died mute,
As the egyptian mummy inside tough,
Now do are you very real prostitute?
Without any youth by betrayal?
Like this goddamned poof?
Poof, poof lie
And clothe of Judas Iscariote's tie,
Chosen very trendy large way and tide,
Shoe of Cinderella miss your not cordially mind,
Too large and so high.
Copyright ©
Dimitriand
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2015-09-14 07:22:35]
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Re: Dwarf
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by Archie on
Monday, 14th September 2015 @ 10:49:30 PM AEST
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| interesting write. Please be careful about the language you use in your poetry children read on this site. It seems like you are mad in this poem at someone. It rhymed well. |
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Re: Dwarf
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 05:54:01 AM AEST
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| Do you speak English as a second language? Because it started off understandable, with an odd, yet interesting order to the words, but by the end, some of the grammar is a bit off, so it ends up being confusing. |
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Re: Dwarf
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by Dimitriand on
Sunday, 3rd January 2016 @ 06:02:17 AM AEST
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| I/'/m russian. Even some russians like not to understand my poetry in russian. But "say it, if they like or not to understand" |
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