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Pour Myself in You
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 08:48:27 PM in AEST
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Let me pour myself in you
In your life, in your dreams, in this moment
Let me cure your broken heart
From your past, from your pain, and your torment
Let me sit down with you
Talk with you
Listen to your story
Let me sit down with you
hear your dreams
Hear all that you wanted
See that moment went wrong
And it broke your heart
Here you stand all broken apart
And your words fill up this page
with no one to read them
So let me sit down with you
Talk with you
listen to your story
Let me sit down with you
here your dreams
this is what you wanted
A friend to be with in this moment
A friend to share all your torment
Let me be that good friend unto you
I will pour a part of me in you
In the course of many days we have done that with one another by our participation on this site. I hope it continues that way and it grows. On a personal level many of you have become as close as family and this song is a dedication to what we can be.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2015-09-13 20:48:27]
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Re: Pour Myself in You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th September 2015 @ 05:19:12 PM AEST
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perfect... simply perfect
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Re: Pour Myself in You
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 07:00:23 PM AEST
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Your poem is a beautiful piece of art Archie. Sadly, (and I will correct it forthwith), I haven’t devoted my attention to your efforts, though you have to mine. I'm sorry for that.
You have a unique and technical insight that bears reading.
Invierno
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Re: Pour Myself in You
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 14th September 2016 @ 02:22:16 PM AEST
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If this website could talk (or...sing?), this is what it would say. Love this!
Hi Archie! Hope you are doing well.
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Re: Pour Myself in You
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th February 2022 @ 12:55:01 PM AEST
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well done
this could have been a ypdc tribute
/'/a friend to share torment/'/
poetic excellence
flow on..... |
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