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the ink can't stay
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 10:39:50 PM in AEST
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in the pen
patterns new
in every
sentence
under
the weight
of words
to shed
my skin
unjudged
curled into
this page
abandoned
illusions
it's all
the same
I give
it three
stars.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2015-09-12 22:39:50]
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Re: the ink can't stay
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 06:30:07 AM AEST
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I give this four stars.
Well done, Ming |
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Re: the ink can't stay
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 06:35:07 PM AEST
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Make it five, as I come to know you through your words.
Invierno |
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Re: the ink can't stay
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th September 2015 @ 12:41:41 PM AEST
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We are our own worst critics, I am certain.
You are correct: the ink can't stay- in the pen.
Not when the act of shedding becomes such an exquisite and intricate display such as this.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp |
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