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Sentiments
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 07:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I still remember that time we drank together
I still feel your peck on my cheek.
I still flinch.
I still dont know why.
All of these useless sentiments,
Tiny fragments of a bone thrown to
A silent
Elusive beggar
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codeofcohen
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2015-09-11 19:55:38]
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Re: Sentiments
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 10:18:34 AM AEST
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| Interesting write, this reminds me of those rare extra special moments we get that make us feel weird. You have portrayed this well. |
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Re: Sentiments
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:53:57 PM AEST
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Love certainly can haunt us. That's clearly depicted here. Great writing,
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Re: Sentiments
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by ming on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 08:22:32 PM AEST
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Very sentimental. I like it. Bitter sweet and insightful.
ming |
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