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The Young Man for Me
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 10:01:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Well look who's heading in my direction
Another guy I cannot show affection
It's not your heart or mind that's the issue
It's how our paths won't let us cross so I can have you
The irony is really getting to me
For you admire everything you see in me
So close we are yet I just distance myself further
Since I'm to please Him above and find the right one to love
It's a shame that you are not a God send
You're stuck at the Story's beginning
While my fate's invested in the end
Someone so handsome and sweet never had a love you claim
Only one thing to that I can say, oi vey
My hope is some girl gives you attention
Someone more like you, I probably should mention
Since we are indebted to social propinquity
I can honestly say you're not the young man for me
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2015-09-11 10:01:44]
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Re: The Young Man for Me
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by Archie on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 06:06:27 PM AEST
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Suddenly the song 'You Remind me by Usher came to mind. I can relate to and I like your poem.
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Re: The Young Man for Me
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by softerware on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 09:32:26 PM AEST
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Oi vey? I broke up! Unexpected as it was, it is a touch of genius to balance out the serious, self-searching nature of the work!
I love the comparison: "You're stuck at the storie's beginning While my fate's invested in the end!"
Been there for sure!
Highly entertaining; and had me nodding along in agreement!
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Re: The Young Man for Me
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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wow! what a nice poem,heart felt and ring with truth.
you express your points very well in this excellence written poem. |
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