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Sailing in your dreams
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 03:47:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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pale blue sky
turned into a pretty sunset
tried to woo me,
my feet you have swept
bought me flowers and candy
and soon we set sail
now I've set the scene
I'll tell you my tale,
We sailed down the river
and through the red woods
he pulled out some flowers
and said they smelled good
He wanted me to have them
as a present to me
I said he was kind,
as sweet as could be
He took that as a compliment
and smiled wide
I couldn't stop blushing,
no matter how hard I tried
He walked me down to the front of the boat
pushed me overboard and said I hope you can float,
As I looked up at him
he sneered at me
Said I was useless,
you should wake up from your dream
so, now here I am
laying in bed
at least I'm not floating
drifting for dead
i'm not sailing out on a stream
I just got rick-rolled by my own freakin dream
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FireStarter
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2015-09-09 15:47:23]
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Re: Sailing in your dreams
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 05:40:12 PM AEST
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| What a twist. I expected a love poem but I get this a very good twist on a love poem. |
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Re: Sailing in your dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 05:50:34 PM AEST
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lol, dreams are funny creatures, this poem was
excellent! love the ending, beautifully creative:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sailing in your dreams
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 05:16:09 AM AEST
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A great twist you have pulled on us.
I dig it. All smiles.
Great write.
James |
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