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Chance
Contributed by
Archie
on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 09:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Hands shake
as my heart beats very fast wondering if this is a mistake
Heart beats
Waiting for your answer, are they the ones I need
Been in this rut for far too long and I know it
I'm hoping to escape this hole of conflagration
Before my mind explodes
So I'm taking this chance to tell you
And lay all my cards on the table
Everything is riding on this one chance
So I'm breaking my own rules
And throwing
the proverbial book out the window
To learn all I can
before my chance is gone
Hand shake
meeting you the first time
there's something about you that is different
A wisdom from study helps you carry on
And life it seems is a bit greener
on your side of the road
Explain to me how you do it
Been in this rut for far too long and I know it
I'm hoping to escape this hole of conflagration
Before my mind explodes
So I'm taking this chance to tell you
And lay all my cards on the table
Everything is riding on this one chance
So I'm breaking my own rules
And throwing
the proverbial book out the window
To learn all I can
before my chance is gone
So if I ask a few questions
Don't take it the wrong way
Questions come like rain after every storm
And if it seems that I'm rushing
I see the light and I want it
Cause I've been in this rut for far too long
So I'm breaking my own rules
And throwing
the proverbial book out the window
To learn all I can
before my chance is gone
Copyright ©
Archie
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2015-09-08 21:30:08]
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Re: Chance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 04:08:13 AM AEST
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It reads like one of your songs, so quite flowing and rhythmic. Very smoooooth!
In any type of relationship, be it friendship, love, business, whatever, it's always a chance that we take.
Best wishes to you and the mystery person!!!
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Re: Chance
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by speedy on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Chance
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 05:36:44 AM AEST
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A smooth flow that seems to sway, much like a metronome.
Every rut is scary to escape, but wanting to escape them is always the first step. Nicely done. :) |
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