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Contributed by
irisblue
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Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 06:55:21 PM in AEST
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I cried today I couldn't believe
I am trying so hard to not wear my heart on my sleeve
I dreamed a sweet dream of you last night
you told me no never give up and fight the good fight
I miss you so much, I miss you Dad
I now do not wonder what if
but remember the good times we had.
Sometimes in this world things can seem so bleak
we need a loving God more than ever I really do think.
With people who can't separate God and church from state
I really feel we must learn to love and reach out not to hate.
So God help guide us, hold us close so not to fall
Help us to love one another differences and all.
Tonight as I close my eyes and rest
I know that each day I can just do my best.
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2015-09-08 18:55:21]
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Re: Raw
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 07:33:04 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Your dad would be proud. |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 08:29:39 PM AEST
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So beautiful, Ms Blue. The world is really getting so messed up and I love the way you hit on that but worked in beauty simultaneously.
I dream about my family too, that have passed on, and I sometimes wonder if it's really them...really them visiting us. I suppose anything is possible.
*hugs you tight*
Loves,
Teim
P.S. I've always perceived you as "fighting the good fight"! You are the Princess in Glowing armor! |
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 09:54:19 PM AEST
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A beautiful heartfelt poem your Dad would be proud of. I wish you the best. May tomorrow bring you comfort without pain.
James |
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 06:16:46 AM AEST
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The very same that any of us can do. :)
I like the sentiment. Too well I know that feeling, overly sensitive, overly compassionate, and naivety getting the best of all of this.
There was a song I liked that had a lyric, kind of dark in its own right, but insightful all the same.
"Bleeding hearts will always run dry..."
Perhaps it's best we try to save that blood for what we truly should be focusing on as we do our best. Same with when we put it on our sleeve.
Good write. :) |
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 21st October 2015 @ 11:59:44 PM AEST
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this flow is full of heart felt feelings
excellent
thanx for sharing..... |
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 12:42:04 PM AEST
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This is a battle cry, a motto, a way of life. So heartfelt!
Fox |
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 01:23:04 PM AEST
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true, honest and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Raw
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 01:05:21 AM AEST
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My heart aches for your loss. This is a beautifully expressed raw piece of writing, with an inspirational ending.
Well done.
~Scorp |
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