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So long ago
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 03:59:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So long ago,
with days gone past
we always thought
the excitement would last
But, the cold dismemberment
of our lives
turned to dust,
and spread to lies
And through the hardening
of our hearts
our happiness died
and was torn apart
One day though,
I hope we can find
the happiness that was buried
deep in our minds
Copyright ©
FireStarter
... [
2015-09-08 15:59:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: So long ago
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 04:04:58 PM AEST (User
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I like your poem because it shown purity of character and spirit |
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Re: So long ago
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2015 @ 06:04:03 PM AEST (User
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sad but hopeful, ...bittersweet,
hugs n' love nessa |
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