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losing me
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 11:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Is everyone gonna stand by
while I bleed..
bleed out
Are they gonna stand by
while I shout..
shout out
Am I gonna stand
alone..
so very alone
While I lose every part of me..?
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FireStarter
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2015-09-07 23:06:31]
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Re: losing me
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by Archie on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 11:54:54 PM AEST
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| I hear you calling, . .Your poem is simple and disheartening. I can't read too much of this as one who has similar struggles. |
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Re: losing me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 02:24:41 AM AEST
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| Wow, powerful!!! :( |
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Re: losing me
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 09:10:15 AM AEST
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You said it for me.
I struggle with this daily.
I see so many people who care about nothing but themselves.
I also have finally realized that you can not force others to do the right thing. My personal life is fine.
But I suffer the ills of no resolution. What I see today in the world slowly crumbles my soul.
Great write!
James |
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Re: losing me
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by ming on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 05:21:53 PM AEST
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You are never alone if you write. Short but sadly sweet. Thanks for sharing.
ming |
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Re: losing me
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 12:33:37 PM AEST
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"While I lose every part of me..?"
Only you have the power to keep you from losing you. You're smart, sensitive and courageous enough to explore your agony through verse. Most do it through the bottle, though for ages I did it through both.
Being sensitive to life, as you are, comes with a velvet curse. Take that strength and use it as a shield to both observe the world around you and to protect you from it.
You are special, Ash; tell yourself that. Tell yourself, "I am special and I will the world to me".
You have a purpose. Know that.
Invierno |
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