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Thank you for the things you do for me.
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 6th September 2015 @ 07:58:53 PM in AEST
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Thank you for the green that fills my heart space
surrounded by an azure sky
Thank you for the sunshine in my window
and for the birds that fly
Thank you for friends who oft remind me
of the gifts you give each day
I don't have to live in self pity
I can take some time out to pray
There are moments when I wonder why you chose me
When I think about all you've done for me
Thank you for forgiving my transgressions
when I fall to weakness
Thank you for love that strengthens
and helps me to do my best
Thank you for the moon and stars at night
and the black before the dawn
They are here to remind me
You from me are not very far
Copyright ©
Archie
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2015-09-06 19:58:53]
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Re: Thank you for the things you do for me.
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 04:32:16 AM AEST
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I like it. The enjoyable moments of the day, whether during it, or at night and inbetween one to the next. :)
It actually made me think as I read it, the fluidity and rhythm of this song here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5SuOgjvk5g
It's basically an 8-bit song, made using older sounds from the original nintendo console from the late 80s, and the gameboy handheld from the early 90s, but if you go to about 0:30, and get used to the rhythm of it, you'll see the rhythm at which I read this.
It's got a "metal-music" style to the vocals at about 1:00, which I don't expect you to like, but the song is rather enjoyable itself. |
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Re: Thank you for the things you do for me.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 11:24:26 AM AEST
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I found myself just wanting to say "amen".
I like it.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Thank you for the things you do for me.
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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Great poem!
That's why they say " don't forget to smell the roses"
I get outside in nature many hours of the day- keeps you sane........
James |
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