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You To Hold
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 12:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Remembering the glory days of old
That together
We once shared
Our spirits were high
Days were long
Full of fun
We had life on the run
Even though we were so poor
We had so much to look forward to
And adore
Empty pockets
Void of gold
It mattered none
As long as I had
You to hold
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-09-04 12:38:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sbhottie288 on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 12:58:30 PM AEST (User
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When I read this poem it automatically helped me remember the good times from my past. Great write. |
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 08:23:54 PM AEST (User
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I can relate to this from my childhood.. There was good and bad but we always stuck together. |
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 09:52:46 PM AEST (User
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"Even though we aint got money, I'm so in love with you, honey"
That is the feeling this conveyed to me. Short, simple, great!!!
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 06:35:29 PM AEST (User
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sweet and loving lovely write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by irisblue on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 08:23:27 PM AEST (User
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James
this poem has such a warmth and ease to it! Love it! |
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Re: You To Hold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 06:33:44 AM AEST (User
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//// I //love // this ditty!!!
Thanks,
Dugan
😎
Yeah, I know but there`s no harm in reading and commenting again. This is one of your best!👍🏼 |
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