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Killing With Knives
Contributed by
crossmyheartwithaknife
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
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I take away their lives,
by stabbing them with knives.
They're all to scared,
to commit suicide.
They told me to kill them,
a long time ago.
Now it's their time,
but they all say no.
Now it's their time,
to finally die.
As I look at my victims,
with their wide open eyes.
I see a river of tears,
falling as they cry.
After stabbing my victim,
i hover over them.
I watch their life slowly,
fade to an end.
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crossmyheartwithaknife
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2003-05-28 22:25:00]
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Re: Killing With Knives
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by Chelly on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:45:19 PM AEST
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| it iz a good poem...but it scared me alil...(P.S. are yu a murderer?) |
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Re: Killing With Knives
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:47:32 PM AEST
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Scared me a little too. So r u a murderer???
Michelle |
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Re: Killing With Knives
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by crossmyheartwithaknife on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:48:39 PM AEST
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| nah, i would never kill anyone, even though i think about it alot, and my friends are always calling me homicidal. |
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Re: Killing With Knives
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:30:21 PM AEST
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| another fantastic poem, and i know your probably sick of hearing this, but i know what you mean, i could never kill anyone either, but i think about it every second of everyday, i love your poems - Becca |
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