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Vamping
Contributed by
AmiasDavies
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Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 07:34:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You try so hard to sleep,
But you have to reach those texts,
Your brain has gone in too deep,
You have to reach the depths,
You have to comment on that video,
You have to catch up,
You reach for the radio,
Time for a change-up,
Two hours have passed,
You choose to sleep,
But you have to reply fast,
The others are all asleep,
You try to close your eyes,
But you are reminded of the past,
You smile at a prize,
The memories are vast,
Your fingers twitch for your laptop,
You watch someone live,
You are in a crop,
In the web you dive,
You swim for entertainment,
You try to find Nemo,
You achieve attainment,
Time for round two,
The hours have passed,
You look outside,
The VIEW is going to last,
That was the longest short ride.
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AmiasDavies
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2015-09-04 07:34:42]
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Re: Vamping
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sbhottie288 on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 12:41:11 PM AEST
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| The title to this poem is misleading. I enjoy how you are writing about technology and how we crave for it every second of every day. I think I would have titled it dependency. Great write though. |
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Re: Vamping
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by Archie on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 04:17:42 PM AEST
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| This definitely fits the 'I want it now' attitude of some people today. You have established your self here. |
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Re: Vamping
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by Archie on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 04:21:29 PM AEST
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| This definitely fits the 'I want it now' attitude of some people today. You have established your self here. |
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Re: Vamping
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2015 @ 04:25:07 AM AEST
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I'm satisfied
I wonder why
in spite of the misery
You are good
You know you are
In your own mind
Mine too.
Be patient
Vamping for
well whom
do we listen too
You?
The little voices of great poets like thee.
I really love your style, have no idea what's on your mind, or what you'll do next.
You're a genius with words, you've got a solid
talent AmiasDavies
You do! Who knows what will come of it?
Peace! |
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