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Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
Contributed by
softerware
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Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 02:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Making rhyme is so like dancing;
Every syllable is prancing;
To a beat where matching lines;
Try to count the same each time!
When I stomp words with my feet
The rhythm pretty much repeats.
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Tak-ing meds that make me loo-py; (8 beats)
Washed down with dry toast and sou-py. (8 beats)
Dis-hes, laun-dry, have to wait; (7)
I’m set on “pro-cras-tin-ate”. (7)
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As for finding words that rhyme;
Write the alphabet one time.
Add each letter to your word
Until a rhyming sound is heard!
Smart is Bart, or Cart, or Dart;
Fart, Heart, Apart, or Tart!
Bigger words such as nutritious;
Turn to d-ishes, w-ishes, mrs.
Words make music you can dance to;
(If you chose to take a chance to)!
Count them out with hands or feet;
The sing-song rhythm’s in that beat.
If the music doesn’t flow;
There’ll always be haiku, you know!
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softerware
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2015-09-03 14:55:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 09:46:33 PM AEST (User
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Not just kids. I found myself making up rhymes as I read along.
For example: Bigger words such as nutritious;
Turn to d-ishes, w-ishes, mrs
or superstitious.
Thank you,
Sir Timotheus |
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Re: Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 10:16:38 PM AEST (User
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You are better at it than I. I use resonance and consonance in most of my poetry. Almost perfect but not. You are amazing.
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Re: Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 12:36:35 AM AEST (User
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Jaye you're always dancing in your writing. :)
A smile on the face and a bit of a "Hey I do that too." lol |
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Re: Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2015 @ 01:21:42 PM AEST (User
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You teach them well |
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Re: Get a Noose; It's Mother Goose!
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 01:59:20 PM AEST (User
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This makes me smile, as you aptly summed up how my mind often works. I'm certain life would be more enjoyable if we all communicated in rhyme. One of my proudest parent moments to date is when my child started recognizing rhymes, and creating his own. He sees the rhythm in everything, and no pattern escapes him. It is so truly awesome to experience with him. Anyway, I'll shut up now...But this poem made me think of some treasured moments, and that is the beauty of poetry!
Thank you.
~Scorp |
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