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Pristinely Natural
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 03:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Nostrils sense aroma
Now kissing the splendid scents
Blissful serene smells
Faint glowing recent,
Setting of the sun, with my-
Eyes Acclimating
Birds chirp with calls to,
Others parted in distance
Separate but near
Proximal living,
But somehow worlds apart
Are we not alike?
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xHeathenx
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2015-09-03 03:19:05]
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Re: Pristinely Natural
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by Archie on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 04:00:38 PM AEST
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| You are making me think of my friend Jon. He used to hike all around New England. Sometimes I would go with him. |
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Re: Pristinely Natural
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 10:09:57 PM AEST
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More like four haikus but still very nice.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Pristinely Natural
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by ming on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 11:32:46 PM AEST
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| Nice. I enjoy a good haiku. |
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Re: Pristinely Natural
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 05:52:34 PM AEST
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exquisite and beautiful!!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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