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No life
Contributed by
disposable_teen
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’ve got no life, no mates, no wife, no dates,
I’ve got nothing to live for,
Only her, but I want more.
Knowing me I’ll probably die, at the age of 25.
It won’t be classed as suicide, because everyone knows that I had NO LIFE!!!
I’ve got no pride, no joy, no side, no toy,
I’ve got a reason to die,
But her, she wont cry, she wont even say goodbye!
I’m going insane, but all I do is ***** complain.
I wish someone would kill me, for the first time in my life,
I wish someone would kill me, I’m already dead inside.
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2003-05-28 22:05:00]
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Re: No life
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 02:53:14 PM AEST
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I really liked this, and i loved the rhythm to it as well. Good work - keep it up.
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Re: No life
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by RANE on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:21:44 PM AEST
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.....but U DO have those words!!!!!!!!
(and hOpe)
I hav2 admit......i know this feeling well.....
every night I want 2 give up....still...every day I wake up....
It hasn't gotten any easier yet.....but I just keep thinking how sweet the sweet will Be when it finaly comes; if I make it...after tasting all this bitterness.
The pain in U'r words really comes through...U'r pain....and U R very much ALIVE...U'r words prove that!.......
I'm SOOOOOOOO FEELING this one........ |
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Re: No life
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by Rose on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:21:19 PM AEST
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Mmmmm how this is done so with so much feeling. I do hope you con't to keep on writing, as it will help you heal. As you vent out your feelings on paper, to this site or others, you will come to know how special the people are on here. Many are the same age group as you. Some like myself are much higher age group... old, but not really in a sense, (attaining some humor here) You have so much to offer in this world, never give up. I know its an old "cliche", but don't. Love has many ways to attain itself, as you have written so in these words, you will overcome these feelings. Please keep writing, and also read the others writes on here. Many feel just the same as you, and really can relate and understand quite well. Keep your writing up, and keep your feelings in them, its what makes your writing, Specially YOURS :)
Take care my dear, and You will be in my prayers. Amber Rose :)
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Re: No life
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by disposable_teen on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:23:10 PM AEST
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| hey some one plz read it |
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Re: No life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:35:02 PM AEST
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| Hey, fantastic, your pain screams out behind the strenthened words (if that makes sense to you...it does to me :S), keep writing |
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Re: No life
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:18:07 AM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. It gives some of us other poets some insight into your life. Your not alone a lot of us just want someone to take our lives.
Always
Amy |
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Re: No life
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by crossmyheartwithaknife on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:30:12 AM AEST
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great poem. sometimes i feel exactly like that. but most of the time im able to keep myself happy and i always try to think positive. sometimes im way too optimistic.
:michelle: |
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Re: No life
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:55:31 AM AEST
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| hmm.. first off warm welcome to ypdc, your write is so full of emotion, i dont think i can say anything that hasnt been said already, i did totally hear you, and i know its from the heart, keep writing it out, be well, ~hugs nessa |
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Re: No life
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by Chuckx on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:51:52 AM AEST
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| I hear you. I am here with you. You are never alone when someone else thinks of you. Keep writing. That is why I'm still here. Chuckx. |
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