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im sorry but this is goodbye
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Wednesday, 2nd September 2015 @ 11:36:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im sorry I stayed
Im sorry I tried
Im sorry but I have to say goodbye
You made me delusional
You caused me great pain
In the end it remains the same
Im sorry I loved
Im sorry I chose
Im sorry that we had to kill the rose
You caused me to panic,
You allowed me to
You lied when you said you were one of the few
Im sorry I lied
Im sorry I cared
Im sorry for the time we shared
You caused me to choose
You said I chose wrong
I get to choose the ending to this song
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FireStarter
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2015-09-02 23:36:44]
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Re: im sorry but this is goodbye
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by Archie on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 05:03:16 AM AEST
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| this reads almost like a song with the chorus changing slightly each verse. Very cool. |
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Re: im sorry but this is goodbye
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 07:41:00 AM AEST
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Great write!
I could have wrote this today myself. In feelings that is. Been there and I feel your pain. Great job!
James |
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Re: im sorry but this is goodbye
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by softerware on
Thursday, 3rd September 2015 @ 03:12:22 PM AEST
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Your style of writing this seems like she is making a laundry list of the reasons she left--in case she ever weakens in her resolve!
People become such a habit. A list can keep us focused until time does its healing, and the last tie is severed.
I enjoyed this very much.
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Re: im sorry but this is goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 12:18:17 AM AEST
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beautifully penned, my favorite lines were:
Im sorry I loved
Im sorry I chose
Im sorry that we had to kill the rose
hugs n' love nessa
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