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I will not forget you

Contributed by banjo on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



These years--but it has only been one--
only been eight months and
I don't remember how many days

how many nights did I sleep
with you in my dreams, to wake
without you in my arms

It is hard. You are not here
you will never be here
but I am, and I have forgotten

how to be here. How to hear
the ticking of a clock you gave me
when it was snowing on my birthday--

No, I think it was Christmas. Did it
snow on my birthday that year?
I only remember you

wearing that ridiculous hat
that hat you always--but
never mind, because

the clock still ticks.
I remember to keep it wound
like you always always told me to

but I can't hear it. There is something
wrong with me, and I can't remember
what it is.





Copyright © banjo ... [ 2003-05-28 21:45:00]
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Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:46:20 PM AEST
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Aww hauntingly beautiful...
Jenni


Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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wow!....just wow! thats all i know what to say about this....i really enjoyed this one a whole lot and again...wow!


Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:07:42 AM AEST
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very beautiful memories.... venkat


Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:46:28 AM AEST
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I ejoy this poem and this style in the way it was written.Well done.
Michelle


Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 05:56:11 PM AEST
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I havent read much of your work...but I truly enjoyed this. It's as if you were speaking to a picture of a lost love, hoping they might hear.

Larry


Re: I will not forget you (User Rating: 1 )
by WiL_CA on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 02:34:37 AM AEST
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i do not like this poem
the way you just mumble about nothing
then at the end......u end up with nothing
but u do talk about nothing very elegantly
must of took u a while to word this

good day




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