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Agony
Contributed by
Candyann
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Tuesday, 1st September 2015 @ 04:05:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Agony is my favorite word
And with all the anger
And laughter
That can be heard
You hear a scream from a distance
You wonder who it is.
You think it is one of your loved ones
But its not
Instead, it is your neighbor getting shot
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Candyann
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2015-09-01 16:05:31]
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Re: Agony
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 1st September 2015 @ 07:26:20 PM AEST
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You lived in a tough neighborhood.
Puts a sharp edge on your rhyme and gives us pause to think ---maybe we aren't so bad off after all!
Nicely done!
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Re: Agony
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2015 @ 11:32:12 PM AEST
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| I grew up in the inner city so I can relate to this poem well. |
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