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An Apology
Contributed by
chuckx
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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I owe you an apology
for behaving badly
when I ought not to have
burned by a passion
that only I had
not shared with anyone
'cept for you, once,
when a slip of the tongue
a poem read out loud
from my heart
split your world
in a confusion
that should not have occurred
only that I inappropriately
lost my cool
and now
humbly
beg
your forgiveness
in an apology.
Copyright ©
chuckx
... [
2003-05-28 21:25:00]
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Re: An Apology
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by ThornMEngla on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST
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Very intriguing; well done!
Makes you wonder - who and does it go along with your other poem?
Good job Chuck and nice to see you here!
Diana
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Re: An Apology
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by PhantomsLDY on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:36:54 PM AEST
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| Great poem and a most sincere apology. i hope she forgives you. |
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Re: An Apology
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:04:45 PM AEST
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How could she not accept this apology..... Beautifully done...
Jenni |
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Re: An Apology
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:17:58 PM AEST
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hi diana,
what other poem? |
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Re: An Apology
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:19:37 PM AEST
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Hey!
Thanks again, Jenni.
Chuck. |
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Re: An Apology
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:22:02 AM AEST
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an apology, beautifully written, I am sure you are forgiven
Shari |
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Re: An Apology
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:10:34 AM AEST
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| well done..venkat |
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Re: An Apology
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:54:54 AM AEST
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Very lovely apology ... I like the way you write.
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Re: An Apology
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:57:24 PM AEST
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| Did you see mine? |
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Re: An Apology
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by ThornMEngla on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:16:18 PM AEST
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'Writing to You'
I liked that poem also. It is a shame the Blue Angel Award is only for a touching or inspiring theme poem and not for an open theme.
Diana |
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Re: An Apology
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by ThornMEngla on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:18:24 PM AEST
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'Writing to You'
I liked that poem also. It is a shame the Blue Angel Award is only for a touching or inspiring theme poem and not for an open theme.
Diana |
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Re: An Apology
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:44:19 PM AEST
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| That is so beautifully written...I am sure everything worked out ...take care |
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