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Depression
Contributed by
AmiasDavies
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Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 04:24:57 PM in AEST
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A futureless future that you want no part in,
A future so disliked it will always spin,
A law in life that will always begin,
A nightmare you dream of when you can’t win.
A feeling that’s so atomic,
A bomb that has no logic,
A fire that’s so chaotic,
An end that’s so chronic.
The man that will always be cursed,
The feelings that felt they can burst,
The sadness that came first,
The thought of the worst.
Something that you will never admire,
The news that’s always dire,
A part that will never expire,
A trap you see with no wire.
Many victims of this affliction,
To them it’s like a constriction,
And to it it’s an addiction,
And we all think it’s fiction.
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AmiasDavies
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2015-08-29 16:24:57]
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Re: Depression
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 04:39:46 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. It is almost like ppl are hanging out in, my head today.
I have depression, your fine poem covers the rest. |
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Re: Depression
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 09:32:27 PM AEST
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Great write!
A secret I learned 30 years ago was not to listen
to those thoughts in your head. When you are clinically depressed they are nothing but lies.
You just have to say the hell with it all and go out and resolve whatever issues you have.
Going through the medical system will bankrupt you and end up making matters worse. Find joy and accomplishment in the little things. Take one minute at a time and have an advocate by your side 24/7............ Time heals all...........
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Re: Depression
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 01:57:20 AM AEST
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Nope, we all don't think it's fiction.
Yet it is possible to overcome!
It is true that others draw strength from
those who find a way to overcome and persevere past the depths of any difficult struggle
It is also true that if you don't understand how
others do have to fight hard
to realize a future you are blind to the truth in this life
You said
"a feeling that's so atomic
A bomb that has no logic"
is extremely true!
And I believe people, the majority know this.
- so, how could it have any logic ?
It just don't. Still, it's very true.
peace!
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